- What are you trying to accomplish? - Showing how the chairs are arranged at a wedding while waiting for guests to arrive.
- Can you identify the subject? - The chairs are the subjects.
- Is there a message? Can you find it? - The message is meant to be excitement and anticipation, and I think the chairs show this well with the bright colors.
- Is it properly exposed? - Yes.
- Is it in focus? Is the right part in focus? - Yes, all of the chairs are in focus.
- Is the subject in a position on the photo that draws your interest? - Yes.
- Are buildings standing straight? - No, the building in the background is not straight, nor was it straight in real life.
- Does the photo feel balanced? If off balance, is this intentional? - Yes, there is about equal amounts of light and dark areas.
- Can you distinguish between positive and negative space? - Yes, the brightness of the sashes and of the white chair covers make it easy to tell the difference between the subjects and everything else.
- Is the background non-distracting? - Yes, it is very clean and the green of the grass provides a nice contrast against the chairs.
- Are frames present? Are they appropriate for the photo? - There are no frames.
- Do any leading lines draw you in or are they working against you? - The arrangement of the chairs themselves are leading lines, curves, that cause the viewers eyes to travel up and down the entire shot.
- What can be removed from the photo that would give a more desirable result? - The wall in the background and the shadow it creates.
- What could have been done better to accomplish your goal with the photo? - Take a wider shot and get the end of the row with pink sashes in the shot as well. Try to remove the wall from the shot, either by changing positions or cropping the photograph later.
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